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wearing a woman’s skin (acrostic)
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wearing a woman’s skin (acrostic) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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wardrobe change, each girl layer a memory on the floor, refashioning of inseams and ideas, nude garment of gypsy impulses, allowing myself to wear my worth, opened buttons down my back, metamorphosis, arrival of freedom wings, needing the cling of this silky, sheer siren’s gown, knowing i've found myself in the fit of this new skin . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sensual and sweet, and all woman!!! Love your sophisticated and playful style. Looking good on you, grly~ |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Such a good poem. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting write, brneyedgrly. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Excellent line! Yes, this is part of the healing process, to be aware of our body and mind power. A new hairstyle is usually part of it too ... You did a great job with this acrostic, dear Shellie! I love your poetic style and skill. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes.. damn I hate windows but I love mirrors.. very cool dance here |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
You 'wear' acrostics very well. Excellent. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
really like this...like the feel of coming into your own,. and owning it!  |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Hey Brney, (I pronouce it "Berney" in my head) I like the way you did that, Acrostic huh... pretty cool. The poem gives a great sense of growth, a feeling of freedom found. Good Work Yoin |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, sweet blues... you always have the nicest things to say |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, dear a... you inspired me to try something new |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~miss march... i never know quite what to think when you say 'interesting'...lol so i will take it as something good! thanks, s |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~my dearest 'rita... yes, i am definitely becoming aware of my 'powers' lol and, yes, this is a part of my healing process...thanks for noticing also, it's funny you mentioned my hair because a few weeks ago i did get a new style... you are so in tune with me love you,  shellie |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dark... should have known i was being watched...  ~browneyes |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, dear jerry... for shootin' me the 'e' word |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, sweet sea... that's exactly how it feels ~s |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yo, dear yo... k.... awww, heck, you can call me whatever you want : ) thanks for liking my freedom found... love,  berney ~lmao~ |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Love the fabric of you Shel. Hubs says the siren's gown is most beautiful in a puddle by the feet... Lovish, Heather |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
I like this! What a fun way to get your point across. Tara |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, heathergirl... you're the best love, shel |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, tara... you can try one too at the poetry challenge |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Looks like you have a hit, miss....and well-deserved. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~why thank you mr balladeer... thanks for answering my questions about it...and for thinking enough to stop and comment you made my day! ~shellie |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
well done!!! very sensual way of showing growth! I love your poem! misce' |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
for the record (and full disclosure), though I may not understand all of the imagery, I certainly found more than enough to be more than impressed...like this: "allowing myself to wear my worth" ...now that is poetry |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks so much for your comment, misce' |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~wow, steave~o! thanks for the props... thank you so much... |
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