Open Poetry #45 |
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A Marked Change |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
![]() If you should find, by some note with strange address, That I could no longer “speak” with you again, Not by a letter or the evening press. Simply know I have a journey to begin, Due to the avenue and crowd held taunt In willing chains beyond all seeming sense. You should not cry, my Dear, no anxious thought, But know it is a path without offense. You should just muse your self with morning’s light And take pure joy within night’s offering. For I will soon as not be in your sight, To commune with you on this one sure thing, I am and I will ever be your friend, Do not let, this short twilight, part us then. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful, bloodline, ....encouraging words... and a beautiful picture to go with it! ~ARH ![]() I dream in fantasy, because reality is scary~Millette (ARH) |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Thank you Romantic Heart, some thoughts toward a day to come, Bloodline |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Bloodline, I like the thought expressed here in this well written poem. It's a good picture too. Love Bobby |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Wado, many thanks, Robert, and for the read, Bloodline |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
What lovely thoughts and so well writen. enjoyed very much. Billie C. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice gentle thought: 'muse yourself with morning's light' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
When a poem adjusts my speed and lets the words linger, I know its got me! Yours fell to a very slow, soft pace. A sadness is there, but gently set aside for a compassionate reassurance. A keeper indeedy! It's been a pleasure to read your poem. miscellanea |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
I swear I thought I commented on this already! Read this several times just to wear the hush. Gorgeous. H |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'm loving your poetry more with each read, Bloodline. Ida |
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