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Open Poetry #45

Dejavu

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

0 posted 2009-07-05 02:34 PM

I get a sense of dejavu
Each time now that I think of you
And wonder do you think of me
Do you remember there was “we”

Remembering us makes me blue
When I get this sense of dejavu
And think of when there was a “we”
And hope you don’t remember me

For all the pain I put you through
I feel it now with dejavu
And from those mem’ries now I flee
So please forget there was a “we”

So you don’t have this dejavu
Of all the pain that grew and grew
And you’ll forget that you had me
So I’ll forget there was a “we”

Arana Darkwolf

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-07-05 02:46 PM

I like it very much, it is so sharable...Alas it is a sad poem but sometimes it is necessary to step agin and forward...Thanks for the delightful write.

yann

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

2 posted 2009-07-05 03:12 PM

Thank you.

Arana Darkwolf

Tiffiena
Junior Member

since 2009-07-03

Posts 19

3 posted 2009-07-05 08:09 PM

Great Job =)

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

4 posted 2009-07-05 08:49 PM

Thank you, Tiffiena.

Arana Darkwolf

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