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OldPoet
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since 2009-06-30

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The Left Coast

0 posted 2009-07-04 11:50 PM

Inspired-8
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Pluto

1 posted 2009-07-05 12:32 PM

Amazing write bravo Poet!

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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OH

2 posted 2009-07-05 09:15 PM

overwhelmingly good! This deserves a trip to the library!

miscellanea

rachaelfuchsberger

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since 2007-02-21

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Las Vegas, NV

3 posted 2009-07-05 09:21 PM

Deffinitely an excellent piece. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Arana Darkwolf

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2009-07-05 09:52 PM

A finely written thorned rose of hell.

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2009-07-07 02:30 AM

Okay, this one does it!!! I am finding all your poetry forever and reading it. This is so fine.

God, wrinkled thighs! That, alone, has gripped me.

Alison

OldPoet
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since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

6 posted 2009-07-07 02:46 AM

Well Alison, I must again bow to something about your replies that compel me to give you what probably is too much information. I wrote this after a dear friend of mine, a Navy nurse, was in an automobile accident. I visited her during her recovery and she expressed some very private thoughts about herself and her situation that had nothing to do with her accident.

A Poet, like a photographer, takes ideas from the lives that unfolds around him (or her).

And I want you to know - You ain't seen nuthin' yet!

John

"Im learning to fly but I aint got wings
Comin down is the hardest thing." - Tom Petty

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2009-07-07 10:33 AM

Bring it on, John! Poetry and TMI - I love both. And ... I am woman enough to handle it!!!

A

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2009-07-07 10:43 PM

cool pic...cool write...excellent theme...(but, I think I know the lady on the left...and the face in the mirror does not do her soul justice)

unboundpoetess
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9 posted 2009-07-07 11:37 PM

<~ also a fan of TMI

and yours, poet.

Enjoying you,
Heather

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2009-07-10 01:56 AM

Just amazing - loved it!

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