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Cold Memory |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast 
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Very nice, I loved how the picture matched your poem, very sad... ~ARH  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, so sad! The pain and sorrow are increased by the thought of what could have been, had not something "unnatural" like war interrupted his life. Intense. Love, Margherita |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Sad, yes, and I love the interplay between the words cold and warm in this yet another extremely stirring poem. Impressive and vivid presentation with the added image to enhance the power of your perfect choice of words. Katriona |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This sad. I found myself looking at the picture more than the poem though because the picture told its own story and was so interesting. Then I went back and just read the poem again. The picture and poem are an interesting combination. Do you create the pictures too? Or do you write to them? I always find it interesting to learn how others combine pictures and poems. The poem is sad. I have a very dear friend whose son came home from Iraq last week. I am so glad this poem is not his story. Thank you for sharing. Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
your poetry is so deep and efficient Old Poet, The choice of pictures totally relevant with the text...Thanks for the beautiful work. yann |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast |
Thanks to all for your comments. Alison, the poem comes first, then I search the net for a corresponding image. "Im learning to fly but I aint got wings |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
well crafted...amazing...simply amazing |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just love the art you are finding to complete your work, they always go together so well. Another wonderful poem. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
though we may grieve, the warrior has found true freedom |
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