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Excitement (senryu)
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Excitement (senryu) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Life is excitement: plucking sparks of awareness to adorn spirit *** |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Margherita, Your spirit and poetry are as beautiful as I remember! It is good to read you once again! Love, misce' |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Fitting words and image certainly lifts the spirit a rapture quality, Bloodline |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
It is good to see something from you Margherita, And your poem does adorn my spirit nicely Thank you Yoin |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your words are as beautiful as my favorite white rose, Margherita. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are such a dear heart! Just Lovely~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pluck away, Maga Margherita! Your awareness sparks awareness and the spirits of those who read your poetry and are pulled into the beauty of your images. Love & Life, Angelo Terrestre  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dearest 'rita... your words, as always, beautiful and breath~taking... this fits me right now and is my new mantra...  love,  ~shellie |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
simply marvellous margherita, the more i read the more i love.... yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, You nailed it Hon. No matter how you cut it, like is exciting. Love Bobby |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margerita - Lovely write! I guess everything is for the purpose of adorning spirit but sometimes I wish it were not so. Enchanting picture! Love Helen |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oh the sheer elegance and grace of this poetic gift makes me swoon ! And the beautiful rose so delicate and fragile is the perfect companion. Always a delight to read you dear Margherita. Katriona |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, your replies warmed my heart. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Margherita.. you are so beautiful in every way in what you gift us here.. thank you xx RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A heart-warming, Margherita masterpiece! Owl |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome and inspiring Margherita! Love, Eric |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Dear Margherita So much meaning in so few words. I love it, thanks for shairing. Love 'un stuff Billie C. |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
So many truths can be said in so less number of words! clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear James, Roniece, Diana, Eric, Billie and Ku, thank you! Enjoyed your kind presence and your loving comments so very much. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
it takes far more skill to adorn a thought with few words than to overdress it with excess verbiage...nicely done |
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Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
Really loved this one, though what is the difference in this to a Haiku. Johan |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Steaven, thank you so much. Yes, that's a point! Dear Johan, thank you for your appreciation. A traditional 5-7-5 syllable pattern haiku should have a reference to nature, while a senryu speaks about human nature. Modern haiku can have also less syllables and many do not distinguish anymore between haiku and senryu, calling all of them haiku right away. If you google search "haiku senryu difference" you will find a lot of material to learn more from experts. I love to do them because it is a challenge to say something meaningful with just a few words. Thank you again. Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A beautiful delicate rose dear Margherita with words to match. most enjoyable. love Lindsay |
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Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
Will look this up, thanks. Johan |
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