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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-07-02 12:50 PM

Consumed by you
Every single thought
And every single breath
Cannot concentrate
To cheat this death

Overwhelmed with this
Feeling for you
And desire to speak
Of it all so much
In which I seek

Blurred in eye
Of vision I see
Reminded always how
Of the want inside,
Wanting you now

Confused by the choice
With the want
And the need
All the same I think,
To want, is to need

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Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2009-07-02 01:12 PM

Once again, the whole poem, particularly the ending strikes a deep heart note for me.
It's at once, both poetic and profound.

You have a tender heart.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

2 posted 2009-07-02 03:58 PM

*whew*

I LOVE this!

DrK&7
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since 2009-07-01

Posts 40

3 posted 2009-07-02 05:43 PM

Wow! It's excellent

Tara Simms Hall
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since 2001-11-07

Posts 87
South Carolina

4 posted 2009-07-03 09:39 AM

I know this feeling well.

Tara

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2009-07-03 03:07 PM

I would like to echo Midnitesun's response.
She said it well.

May your needs be met, Sir Poet Knight.

EA

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2009-07-03 03:52 PM

this sums it up with that feeling of suspension

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