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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Were it possible to feel Would I? When the world spins so Could I? Whenever life whirs past Should I? Touch the pedal-brake To slow the go And should I interfere Would I know That I had sketched the face Of sovereignty? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
or would someone reign on your parade? kewl stuff guy |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."Touch the pedal-brake To slow the go And should I interfere Would I know That I had sketched the face Of sovereignty?" Excellent thoughts here. Especially the ending. We all do, do we not?  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Interesting, dear Steaven. Yes you have the power to slow down and to choose a new awareness. Profound. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I do know how your feel! In fact, a few years ago I posted a poem entitled "Stop! I Want to Get Off!"  Whenever we feel caught up in a whirlwind, it is important for us to ground ourselves, be still, go within, and think about the situation ~ whether it be self-imposed or otherwise. Your poem offers fine food for thought!  Linda |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this - and if some else tries to reign on your parade? Buy an umbrella drink. Yep, that should work. A |
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