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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
inspired by a comment by 2islander2 Ethereal being, soul-soother Respite-rancher, dream-herder Lost in reverie sublime Healing body, transforming mind Ethereal being, defrauding sadness Washing ashore gladness On the coastlines of the mind Filling sight-joys of the blind Ethereal being, planting soft-seeds In furrows of our hard-packed deeds Resting in resolute restoration Oases bloom in charcoaled desolation Ethereal being, flow to us unbidden Ethereal being, restoring joys yet hidden To our corporeal want To our corporeal need |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really enjoyed this  very nice! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pretty darned cool Steavenr...enjoyed the tone of this one |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
yann will be very happy that he inspired such a lovely poem. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Steave, this is downright "ethereal" and soul soothing!  There are some pretty cool lines in there! Very much enjoyed! May all your joys be restored! Love & Light, Linda  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is a wonderful invocation, dear Steaven! Love, Margherita |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~steave... Ethereal being, soul-soother Respite-rancher, dream-herder ~love these lines! loved your poem! ~s |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
SEA, so glad you enjoyed & even more so that you commented Dark, high praise from you, kind sir Ida, just pleased that you stopped by Linda, thank you for your generous comments Margherita, you, truly, are in the spirit of this write ~S thanks for commenting on those lines...I appreciate it |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~steavenr... i came to read this again and then these lines popped out at me: Ethereal being, planting soft-seeds In furrows of our hard-packed deeds i really, really like this poem! ~s |
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