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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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meandering wind, perhaps a dancer seducing leaves that left their mother before listening to her wise rustle my eyes are just windows without voyeurs catching these imaginations in buckets without bottoms to bend their momentary wings old oceans walk barefoot on sandy shoes they glance at breezes like curious children playing with wet and already used matches a distant sky has her arms over her head pretending that her horizon is something new and she holds it up for the sun to notice as he looks back over his left evening ______________ daark |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Daark You know, sometimes I am spellbound when I read your poetry. It's a feeling almost like the words weave and twist at every turn and I am mesmerized by them. It's a good feeling to start my day. Ali-san |
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DrK&7 Junior Member
since 2009-07-01
Posts 40 |
Very dark, but exceptionally well pieced together. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ali-san It might be the oatmeal that does that? Messmaredeyes I mean? Thanks little one ___________ Drk7 thanks for the read. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
dark... a distant sky has her arms over her head pretending that her horizon is something new and she holds it up for the sun to notice as he looks back over his left evening ~this is almost melancholy... i got lost in this and i love the places that it took me... ~s |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms browneyes. Thank you for stepping through the beads here. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
once again, another stunning work...fell in love with this phrase: "catching these imaginations in buckets without bottoms to bend their momentary wings" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Steavenr Thanks amigo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You and the wind spirits of seduction ... you dance with words like no one. But you are also the choreographer, knowing the right position of every single word according to its special meaning ... and there is something infinitely graceful in the result. Perfect! Love, Margherita  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar....thanks lady friend _________ ms van, thank you |
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