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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
 Quicksand Dry, alone, untouched. burried 'neath beige sands. leaving me behind had cost me my life, my heart. The warm winds of summer, has taken away my remains of light. My heart was broken now filling with sand of the earth. I feel dry, my body left dormant. I am enveloped by the desert. sunken into the quicksand. ~ Lana |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So powerful that I am gasping for air, as if I was in the quicksands too ... This hurts, but the heart has wonderful healing resources, we experience this again and again. Well written. Love, Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
After Reading three poems this being the third, Broweyedgrl, and the new poet on PIP, and now yours, when love is gone....these poems are very powerful, emotionally intense in expression.... yours, the picture and the poem, just great, my hats off to you! ~ARH |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Emotions and painful words fill every line upon this page of blue. A very sad write Lana  ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
Margherita, thnx |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
a romantic heart, thank you for your kind words Lana |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
artic wind, thnx Lana |
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