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my friend remember
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my friend remember |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Oh my friend remember, when you walk in marshes, you have to move forward and cross the restricting sadness and sickness, cause my friend remember there are lands outside with trees and green valleys which wait for you to talk and share about what you like. Oh my friend remember when you walk in marshes, there are verdant lands. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (07-01-2009 06:30 AM).] |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
well said and oh so true |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, mon ami Yann, c'est beau et ça donne du courage. Un message très important. Yes, true and wise! Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Yann.. I love this wonderful gifting from you.. it has made me feel positive.... thank you for sharing..  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Your simple words "cross the restricting sadness and sickness," moves me in a deep sea of thoughts. So true you, my poet, are. clever talks delay friendship! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks martiniat for the appreciating and appreciated comment. have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
dear margherita, thanks for the kind comment, sometimes we need to cheer up to keep on walking and cross rivers of life...Your words were important for me in your last poem... regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Roniece, good to read something about you, time go so fast... have a nice day in sydney. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks poddarku, your appreciation is important and I confess your poems inspire me in a subtle way. have a nice day yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, Yann, this is a very, very beautiful and special poem. Besides saving it in my Yann folder, I am going to read it often, not only for its beauty, but for its truth. With your permission, I will also send it to various friends (always with your name attached to it, of course) when they need it most. May I? Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for sharing this lovely gentle reminder. It is very soothing. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Yann, This poem is well written. I like it. Bobby |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Good Yann Something almost native chant about it. John . |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
dear Owl, it is so kind to comment the poem in your own special way...I am glad that you found it interesting and happy that you would share it with friends. Thank you very much. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks midnitsun for reading and commenting, your kind words warmed me. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Bobby I appreciate you passed on the track of my poem. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks John, sometimes the most simple things are the most precious, I am honored by your appreciation, thanks for passing by. yann |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oh yes so true, what a lovely nature poem, I did enjoy reading this. Heart2Heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks heart2heart, i appreciate your words. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you for visiting and commenting James. have a nice day yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Yann, for your lovely reply to mine and for your permission to pass this on, and especially for being happy that I will. Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yann, your beautiful spirit is an inspiring one. This reads like a psalm. This was very soothing. An exquisitic gift of reassurance.  So often we cannot see the forest for the trees... Love and a warm hug, Linda |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a sweet reminder of optimism! Very much enjoyed, islander! miscellanea |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you Owl and Linda for the precious comments...Great to know you. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks miscellenea, I am glad you appreciated the poem and left a message... have a nice day yann |
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