Open Poetry #45 |
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An embrace unwanted |
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PrestonThePoet Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 87 |
Through an unclosed eye, I watch what you thought I’d never see. The tears blur my sight. But I don’t have the strength to blink. Still you scratch at my back. Pretending I’d never seen it. The cyanide from your lipstick, Burning kisses into my neck. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
intimate and colorful words, a very gracious poem... yann |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
wow! powerful stuff preston! In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You certainly don't deserve that! You deserve gentle love and kisses! My goodness, Preston, "An Embrace Unwanted" ~ to be sure! Giving you a warm, GENTLE hug, EA ![]() |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Passionately written! I read it twice already and am going for a third time now. Love your poem! misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Just going to have to save this to my library! So few lines speak so much! misce' |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Glad to see you writing again, Preston. Ida |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! ~ARH |
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