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Open Poetry #45

Jonathan Livingston Jane (with Ctowen)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-06-09 08:08 PM

distant shores of premonition
natural rhythms of sand and stone
coast to coast

polished hues of sea glass
crimson to cobalt
jaded

eye for an eye
word for word
the others' rise

woven symmetry,
dips and headwinds
poetic pageantry
in flight

our fellow whims,
muse to muse
connecting
by land and by sea

mutual skies, winged
perceptive in this flight
caught freely,
in words
now set
to be released

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2009-06-09 08:17 PM

Brava you two, separate, you are a treat to read, and together, you are absolutely, pure delight. A pleasure to read you both, again. hugs n peace ~D

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

2 posted 2009-06-09 08:18 PM

And free and boundless
as the open sky, sweet
words of heartfelt muse,

Bloodline

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2009-06-12 10:11 PM

Brava you two!!

You duet in style, seriously!
Many kudos and warm hugs~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-06-13 06:11 PM

This makes me sigh in admiration ...

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2009-06-14 12:42 PM

You two write beautiful poetry together - I am not sure I have seen such a smooth partnership here before.

Alison

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2009-06-15 02:56 PM

Thank you everyone for your kind replies, as always it was a pleasure to write with Michele. We are still waiting for the link to our published works together, some we haven't shared here on PIP's, so please bear with us. We also have our own books out if interested.

Thanks again!!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2009-06-16 08:37 AM

and you do release your words so well...
enjoyed very much
Lee J.

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