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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
it was over before it began a twisted perspective whispered behind closed eyes and doors. a velvet curtain inhibited their train of thought in regret of a lack of tracks or structure bought and sold along with her self respect innocence forfeited in a final act two passions hinted the finish line before the starting gun proclaimed the beginning of tomorrow's race his self-righteous epiphany boldly announced a fresh beginning of over-used truths while rejected words peered behind a trembling facade. assumptions play hide n' go seek with romeo's dirty little secret as juliet embraced the lead role as understudy the limelight was seduced by the lowest bidder in our drama that ended before it began. [This message has been edited by kindredspirit (06-30-2009 11:29 AM).] |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
highly satirical.. love the lines : "his self-righteous epiphany boldly announced a fresh beginning of over-used truths" love, Min |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Thank you Min. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Now this is a mystery. I enjoyed this much. |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Chalmette Guy, Every mystery has a solution. Do you have any leads for this particular case? I'm glad you enjoyed it.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A well crafted intriguing read, greatly enjoyed. I especially liked this: "a velvet curtain inhibited their train of thought in regret of a lack of tracks or structure" |
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