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The Gift Of The Written Word
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The Gift Of The Written Word |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Tear-stained letters, written with the best words, filled to impress and express, hopes and dreams of a future, Their style, as letters of old, hand written, signed, stamped, the art of letter writing, long forgotten, to be admired, When holding the past in your hands, those days were the best of days, excitement going to the mailbox, just thinking what it contained. As I read your words for me, I would just think of you there, writing in your room, dark, enough light to write by, You were always listening to your music, as you drew pictures for me, when you traveled on your bike, music in the bath, we shared so much. The whole world stopped, when you appeared, a dream, It was if we had time traveled, lovers long ago, found again, Your letters are gifts to me, I treasure the moments, moments you made me feel so alive, maybe next time around, You and I can be together, just as we were meant to be, without distance robbing us, I want you to know, I still think of you, when I see a rainbow.... |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
A sweetness and soft sighs touching the heartstrings with rainbows of love for tender memories, as it should be, Bloodline |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
The whole world stopped, when you appeared, a dream, It was if we had time traveled, lovers long ago, found again, Your letters are gifts to me, I treasure the moments, moments you made me feel so alive, maybe next time around ~love this, heart... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
another effective 'write'! and, once again, I am especially fond of the ending hinting at reincarnated love!: "maybe next time around... You and I can be together, just as we were meant to be, without distance robbing us, I want you to know, I still think of you, when I see a rainbow..." [I most assuredly wish someone would 'think of me' when they see a rainbow!] for me, that last line is grand-fine 'Romanticism' applause for this 'penning' ! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very beautiful! it sang beauty Lee J. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing~~ M |
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