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Open Poetry #45
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Elemental Warrior
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since 2009-05-27
Posts 20
North Carolina
0 posted 2009-06-29 11:41 AM


Wind

Gentle comes the breeze
Wafting through the trees
Tugging ever so gently
On the leaves that bloom

Serenity drifts down onto
A peaceful breath of tranquility
That shifts the hues
And stirs the blues

What a life to have
Simplicity with no changes
What it would be
To be free as me

peace flows into our lives
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Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
1 posted 2009-06-29 11:58 AM

Very pretty and serene, puts me in a calm mood.
Heart2Heart
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-06-29 12:23 PM

The possibility to be aware of the calming breeze brings such serene emotions.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita
poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india
3 posted 2009-07-01 07:30 AM

This is so serene! Good rhythmic poem.
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