Open Poetry #45 |
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from a pen about to be stilled... |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
standing below the starry heavens, this pen painted world with words; sitting idly by gugling streams, swam with fish, flew with birds. this pen wrote of love, of passion, this pen wrote of smiles and tears; tinting the world with a different shade, saw people's dreams, knew their fears. quilled the hopes the heart cherished, washed away the evil thoughts, dreamt of a future, of an eartly heaven, hoped to create an immortal quote. but, all is dark now, stars put out- and, i fear the pen is struggling for breath... miles and miles are yet to be quilled, why, oh! why, is it the time of death..... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A chillingly beautiful write, holding special meaning for this reader. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I appreciate your melancholic ponderings ... just received a note from Neale Donald Walsch (daily messages) about death. Want to share it with you: quote: Your pen dances beautifully, yes. Love, Margherita |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dearest minoli... you've done it again, little one...beautiful! quilled the hopes the heart cherished, washed away the evil thoughts, dreamt of a future, of an eartly heaven, hoped to create an immortal quote. ~you keep writing...i think you are quite capable of penning an immortal quote ![]() ~love, s |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your words are immortal, Minoli. Sending you a hug. Ida |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
Dear Margherita, that is so beautiful..and full of hope..i most sincerely hope that it really is so.. i share ur sorrow.. Dear S and Ida, thnx sooooooooooo much..it really is my greatest dream to achieve an "immoratal" quote.. whether poetical or in my career as a doctor(hopefully!) love and hugs, Min |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Immortal quotes are the etching of your heart, and spoken, they engrave others. I am very moved by your words, because of the glass that we "see through darkly." However, Love never leaves us where it finds us, and Love is Life. Peace. ![]() (Margherita, Thank you for sharing the quote on life, for shedding light on a spiritual truth. ) |
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