Open Poetry #45 |
from a pen about to be stilled... |
MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
standing below the starry heavens, this pen painted world with words; sitting idly by gugling streams, swam with fish, flew with birds. this pen wrote of love, of passion, this pen wrote of smiles and tears; tinting the world with a different shade, saw people's dreams, knew their fears. quilled the hopes the heart cherished, washed away the evil thoughts, dreamt of a future, of an eartly heaven, hoped to create an immortal quote. but, all is dark now, stars put out- and, i fear the pen is struggling for breath... miles and miles are yet to be quilled, why, oh! why, is it the time of death..... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A chillingly beautiful write, holding special meaning for this reader. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I appreciate your melancholic ponderings ... just received a note from Neale Donald Walsch (daily messages) about death. Want to share it with you: quote: Your pen dances beautifully, yes. Love, Margherita |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dearest minoli... you've done it again, little one...beautiful! quilled the hopes the heart cherished, washed away the evil thoughts, dreamt of a future, of an eartly heaven, hoped to create an immortal quote. ~you keep writing...i think you are quite capable of penning an immortal quote ~love, s |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your words are immortal, Minoli. Sending you a hug. Ida |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
Dear Margherita, that is so beautiful..and full of hope..i most sincerely hope that it really is so.. i share ur sorrow.. Dear S and Ida, thnx sooooooooooo much..it really is my greatest dream to achieve an "immoratal" quote.. whether poetical or in my career as a doctor(hopefully!) love and hugs, Min |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Immortal quotes are the etching of your heart, and spoken, they engrave others. I am very moved by your words, because of the glass that we "see through darkly." However, Love never leaves us where it finds us, and Love is Life. Peace. (Margherita, Thank you for sharing the quote on life, for shedding light on a spiritual truth. ) |
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