Open Poetry #45 |
The bride wore flip-flops |
faeriemythc Junior Member
since 2009-06-18
Posts 40KY |
I did this one for fun. It was for a friends daughter after her wedding. The Bride Wore Flip-flops The ring bearer was a joy The bride and grooms own son When he flashed his winning smile Every guests' heart was won The flower girl walked down the aisle She only got halfway She shook her head, her lip stuck out The she ran away The mothers were the next in line With tears in their eyes Memories of their young ones Of years passing by As the procession went on The bride came into view she had flip-flops on her feet They were her wedding shoes The tears were shining in her eyes A beautiful vision in white Glowing and radiant She was a lovely sight She met her groom atop the stairs Her heart was beating fast She said her vows and kissed the groom This love was meant to last |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Faeriemythc, Hey, I was there for that. My oldest granddaughter was at her parents wedding. I held her in my lap. It was a lovely affair. Love Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
faerimythic, This is charming. I love the image of the flower girl. My best friend is getting married and she won't let me be flower girl! I am seriously bummed. But, I do get to be Maid of Honor. But ... flower girl ... I love flowers. Love this poem too. Alison |
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Sonofgloin Junior Member
since 2009-06-09
Posts 48Australia |
The flower girl walked down the aisle She only got halfway She shook her head, her lip stuck out The she ran away........yes I've seen that...Paul |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You tug at our heartstrings with this beautiful poem, dear Carmen. So lovely and vivid. Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A lovely poem. Welcome to Pip! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
At least she didn't flip-flop over the vows! Enjoyed this. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
A lovely poem, glasslippers or flip-flops:-). My daughter got married two weeks ago, always so emotional... Heart2Heart |
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faeriemythc Junior Member
since 2009-06-18
Posts 40KY |
Thank you all. aka Carmen |
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