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From Beginning to End |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Searching for inspiration, I ended up in the Poetry Challenge forum and saw an old challenge for a poem on falling out of love. Here's mine: From Beginning to End It starts with a smile A look…coy and cautious A sigh…like a prayer A longing…to touch Yearning…to feel Falling…so fast into Love. Love’s end-- Falling…away from each other Yearning…for what is lost A longing…unmet A sigh…never heard A look…unnoticed It ends with a tear |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Learn by your mistakes Tara and I hope you have better luck next time. Good luck. Lindsay |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I really enjoy the challenges. It's great that you are rambling through them - I like your poem. It's interesting and I might have to try my hand at it. Alison |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oh my! I have been there, and felt this pain. And, cried those tears. |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
I love the symmetry of this! Especially how well you encapsulated the rise and fall of love. The romantic in me both laughs happily and sighs sadly when reading this. Well done! I may have to try this - intriguing |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Very clever construction here. And I enjoyed the all-too-true sadness of it. Nice. |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
so so so true in its simplicity... love, MIn |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Thanks, everyone, for reading. Tara |
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