Open Poetry #45 |
Tucked Away |
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Whatever I thought of you is neatly folded and put away in a box painted with a star map of what was. Don't bother to look for it, it has no concrete properties so it is immune to invasion of privacy. Now... Don't you feel better? Ida Werrett |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yes, miss march... some things are better left echoing on heart~strings... i really like this poem : ) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
excellent !! much (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Yes!!! Love the way you tell it like it is. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ida, I always feel "better". This is a cute statement. Love Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, excellent is right! I love your take on things such as these, dear Ida! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whew! Much better! lol Have I ever told you that you are adorable? ~ Of course I have! ~ but I am 'ditto-ing' myself here...ADORABLE Loveya Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes most adorable dear Ida Love Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I do feel better. I have a box like that. Some things are just good to tuck away. Thank you, Ida. Alison |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I, too, have a box like that, Ida. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well said, dear Ida. Invisible boxes do weigh a ton though. Helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's so true, some things must stay safely tucked away in a locked mind-corner. Enjoyed this very much, Ida. |
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