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Heartbreak times two.
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Heartbreak times two. |
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Sonofgloin Junior Member
since 2009-06-09
Posts 48Australia |
Twenty years have come and gone your last glance still remains, a tattered memory of your face from tears I must refrain. To have loved so long and hard and deep with naught at it’s end, I count the days without you dear with a love nowhere to send. From city scape to country side my eyes seek out your form, your scent your voice your silken skin leave me but forlorn. What chance to meet or see your face once again before I die, I pray to gods and wizards grand but always end it with a sigh. Why give me heart and take the only prize that won it over, why give it in immaturity and not when it was older. My woe was ended on a Saturday morn as I read the papers, your name and death were side by side angels now your neighbours. My loves lost pain is at an end and I march towards tomorrow, partnered with my new best friend deepest darkest sorrow. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Sonofgloin, my heart goes out to you my friend for your tragic loss. You have written a sad but beautiful tribute to a a wonderful lady, and to still think the way you do after twenty years shows what she must have meant to you. A great poem. Lindsay |
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Sonofgloin Junior Member
since 2009-06-09
Posts 48Australia |
Appreciated Lindsay. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am sorry for your loss x 2. It is quite apparent by your moving words, that you loved her deeply. Now that she is in spirit, she may find you again.  Giving you a warm, compassionate hug, Love & Everlasting Light, Earth Angel  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A melancholic write, very intensely rendered. Love, Margherita |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I was nearly in tears at reading this beautiful rendering. Thank you for sharing your soul with us. She must have been SOME woman to evoke that much intensity. Arana Darkwolf |
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Sonofgloin Junior Member
since 2009-06-09
Posts 48Australia |
Once again thanks to all you folks. I do not think that I will be going down such a personal themed track again, hurts too much, I will stick to the mundane from now on.....Paul. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~oh, son... i really feel this... My woe was ended on a Saturday morn as I read the papers, your name and death were side by side angels now your neighbours. My loves lost pain is at an end and I march towards tomorrow, partnered with my new best friend deepest darkest sorrow. ~this has always been how i didn't want it to end one day haunting... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
An emotional, melancholy poem, but very beautiful in it's loneliness. A heavy heart is hard to shake, and no one likes to lose at love. ... you've conveyed the feeling well. |
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