Open Poetry #45 |
Whisper. |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Whisper my wildwood name, across evening waters dark, disturbed only by rippled circles of glooping carp. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Goldenrose, I love a good nature whisper. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~Very seductive I am going camping and hiking in the wildwoods tomorrow night... ~ARH |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"glooping"? ~ I don't know whether you made that word up or not ~ but it works for me! lol I'll have to remember that! Whispering your name across The Great Pond, Linda |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
This started out to be, what I thought was going to be a short romantic poem, Then I read the last sentence, and laughed my butt off. Glooping carp??????? In my wildest dreams, I never imagined to read "Gloopiing Carp" in a Poem. Funny, Tracey |
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