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Old Bill Pepper
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Old Bill Pepper |
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georgek Member
since 2009-06-07
Posts 79
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Old Bill Pepper had hoped to get better. He sat up in bed and hit his poor head Broke up in pain, As he went all insane Mumbled a curse Then called for the nurse Cried out in vain despite his great pain She hurried her pace after powdering her face Greeted poor Bill having a bloated blue gaze All dead and bled, like a budgie she had fed. Kissed him and prayed, then sent for the maid Then blessed him she may Till he fell in his grave. All sorry was she, as she played with the sheet That had covered poor Bill who had written his will. No more had she had Than the pan and the fan As an empty bed lay Lest Bill Pepper could stay? |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
This is very creative and unusual...I like it.  |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
great word play, Nice, Tracey |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
georgek - enjoyed the write... BC |
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georgek Member
since 2009-06-07
Posts 79 |
Many thanks folks.... Sorry for the delay in answering George |
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