Open Poetry #45 |
Where to Go |
Dreamer05 Junior Member
since 2009-06-23
Posts 30Kansas |
Where to Go I don't know who he is. I don't know who I am. Where am I going in life? I don't know if I can, continue on this path I'm on. Where will it soon lead? Someone direct me! Tell me where to go. Please! Lost in a world of confusion, I'm dizzy and can go no further. Won't someone tell me where to go? Oh! This is such a bother! Lord, direct me, tell me where to go. What will please you and make me happy, I honestly don't know. ~Dreamer05~ May 19th, 2009 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome Kristine. Nice flow to your first post. A timeless question... creative presentation; an ethereal feeling to the verse. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
amen to that, i too share your quandry |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! This place will really grow on you! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip! I think we are all on the same boat and can relate to your first entry, which is well done! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Dreamer05 Junior Member
since 2009-06-23
Posts 30Kansas |
Thanks everyone! I really appreciate the welcome and the feedback. I am looking forward to reading other members works and sharing my own. Take care all! ~Dreamer05~ |
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