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Soup, straight up
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Soup, straight up |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Doors open turn to left table ready spoons and forks in plastic sleeve tattered rose dollar vase a hungry harvest white and black and shades between some with canes some with carriage the faithful and the godless chatter/clatter ham set on centerstage colored rice/mix of greens a prayer recites the servers start they come to mingle they come to sit but first they come to fill the need |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inki..you always make me hungry..enjoyed your spread babe |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goddess, this played out before me like daguerreotypes in reel.   EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It would not surprise me, dear Michele, if you volunteered in such a place where those in need can find a meal. And you have captured the scenery so very well. When the basic need for food is satisfied, they certainly will also enjoy the warmth of company and the possibility to chat and share their experiences. Very incisive write. Thank you for this. Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this Michele  ARCTIC WIND |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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