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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Please I beg thee , kiss the sorrow off my brow, taste the loneliness upon these dry lips, fill my ears with whispers of angelic love, These empty arms ache to be embraced, fingers desire to be intertwined, clasped, inside these eyes your reflection, My fragile heart cannot take the torture, a river of thoughts runs threw my mind, the dam is on the verge of breaking, Come my love, wrap you love all around me, feel my heart, that has been emptied, only to be filled with your lovers words, The night draws close, the hardest part of day, for when I lay my head upon a lone pillow, it is but, a poor substitute of your chest, When I close my eyes to dream, dreams seem real, only to awaken without you here, insanity, madness of heart, endless torture, Come quickly my love, or else I shall surely die! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-25-2009 12:10 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
A Romantic Heart - you do write from the heart, very nice. Oh, by the way, I be there on the next flight... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No, you will not die, but the longing and yearning will intensify and ask for fulfillment. May he be back soon. Beautiful romantic outcry! Bill brought smiles ... Love, Margherita  |
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HAZARD Junior Member
since 2009-06-24
Posts 40ENGLAND |
Hello - I'm new - so much to do here - and lots to learn from people too. Heres a few things about love this work brings back to me. Your Poem reminded of Keats and his love of Beauty - and of course of Plato and his Symposium about love and why we search for it - why we long for company and support. Keats spoke of beauty as one of Platos essences or Forms. The greeks were both mythical and objective about Love - Love was the wound suffered from the gods when they split man/woman into two distinct beings - Love is the actual essence that lies behind all life and things. love and beauty must be by its very nature the love of immortality as well as of the Beautiful. We suffer in order to complete ourselves. Oh well back to the grind - to earthen day! HAZARD |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Beautiful, just beautiful Yoin |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
You are too much!!! Another great write. Actually just incredible then I find one that you write inspired by me and I think Wow!! Why has she not published a book or been on display somewhere. You really should be sharing this with a much larger audience!!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sim~ you are too much!...you know you are inspiring me to do that, I have been thinking about publishing, and with your encouragement, and words of inspiration , I just might do so... Thank you so much, I am really, really smiling and happy that you think of me as such a great writer....it just comes from the heart! Hugs~ARH  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bill~ your a sweetheart! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Marg~lol yes and I hope soon! no I will not die, but it sure feels like it! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Has~ Well, hehe, it is good to be mentioned as a Plato...what a compliment! and in the same sentence as Keats.... Two in one wow! Thank you! and welcome to PIP! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
yoinn~ Thank you, just thank you so much! |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
a gorgeous write! |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
painful in itz beauty.. |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
You really should!!!!! You have such talent that should be shared!! Rich |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I too have felt the paing of loneliness, I know how hard it is to be without someone to love. I only hope you actually have someone coming back to take away your loneliness, because when he gets there, I think he is in for some serious loving. If you are looking for that special someone, I hope he can handle you, because it sounds like you have a whole bunch of love stored up, just waiting to be poured upon the lucky guy. With your looks and tallent, You should do just fine. Love intensly, live to the fullest, share it. Tracey. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Only one who has experienced such yearning and longing can write in this exquisite and beautiful way. Wonderful poesy dear ARH. Heart2Heart |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
bitter goodness, i like your poetry Lana |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I never noticed I missed this beauty! ~ Excellent write ARH~ Loved it  to youARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
awww <3  |
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