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Untangled Ribbons
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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They begin to wrap, one at a time, silky smooth, sometimes velvet, sometimes passionate red, Subtle, layers began to form, if in check, they are laced, intertwined artwork of beauty, One day you may find, if you take a second glance, there are knots, bindings, Then you see it, clearly, what was to bind and tie securely, to wrap the heart, to protect, Now becomes a prison, bound , choked, tightening, ribbons of red turn black, Soft velvet words layered, now become chains, holding, controlling, smothering, Now all you have left, after the romance is gone, the fire has been stomped out, what love did we weave?, knots of frustration, deception, mistrust, all that remains, is untangled ribbons. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
what love did we weave?, knots of frustration, deception, mistrust, all that remains, is untangled ribbons. ~i hate when things unravel : ) love...your poem is woven beautifully |
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