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shiver speak of lady tree |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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 she returned again with that tuesday dawn high heels on the morning side of her holidays like a fiji dream with sun warmed waterfalls laughter whispered as glances from her eyes lady tree limbs were goose flesh inspiration like from the brim of recognition perhaps when the woman of her mind went dancing and the rocking shoe men quietly worshiped with glances they would spend like prayers or was it just the chill of being a woman when the man trees stirred in their wind and were of sudden smitten by her sky ways when she was some velvet color of lovely _____________ daark |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A "velvet" sky to complement your "velvet" words...  Wishing you all the best in 2010, EA  www.lindadowd.com |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
I like how you created men inside of nature. Amazingly creative. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Smitten by your sigh ways is more like it!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ laughter whispered as glances from her eyes lady tree limbs were goose flesh inspiration like from the brim of recognition perhaps ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Your writing is like peppermint candy, it is just too cool and makes me tingle all over. Happy New Year hugs and lovies, big guy!! |
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noman Junior Member
since 2009-12-26
Posts 18 |
This is really good. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms EA, thank you much lady friend..have a wonderful new year. ________________ SlowlyFallAway, thank you for the eyes and touch... __________________ ms bluezy, thank you tingleskinlady..have a happy new year and keep on smiling babe ____________________ noman, thank you and welcome to the pipzoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Yes, "gooseflesh inspiration"! You are a wonder. And you are so much missed! Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
there is always something about water, words, and whispers that make some moments endless. Photos help. Well done, Sir. |
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