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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2009-12-27 08:38 PM



The sand overlapped their bodies
Staring vividly at the night
As if their eyes were stars
Between the dark pitch

Between the East and West,
Their voices unheard, unneeded,
Being swallowed by the shores of the sea,
They became blankets on a path of sand
As their bodies lay print to the sands smooth trenches.

ItÕs the kind of language you hope for;
Two eyes resting at the ease of another,
No words, but a shore and a night,
Orchestrating the symphony of a night-full breeze
With two mates watching with front row seats.

It is the guided maze of her body next to his
To their bodies crossing
As the waves hit the sand
On the shores of a never-ending night.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-12-27 09:25 PM


It's the kind of language you hope for;
Two eyes resting at the ease of another,
No words, but a shore and a night,

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Oh man, this makes my heart go pitter-patter.

Your night sky and shoreline is absolutely exquisite!!!

Loved this, very much!

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