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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2009-12-26 10:00 AM

Icebergs sneak
inside her head,
not easy to navigate
without risking to wreck.
To observe the horizon,
to live on the starboard beam,
to change of course,
to turn to port side,
it is sometimes better
to come back to the port
and to abandon the hope
that she loves you,
then to savor stars.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2009-12-27 03:37 AM

You sound like a wise man, yann.
Ida

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2009-12-27 03:53 AM

Thanks Ida, we have to take care sometimes about our sentiments and thoughts. Thanks for the read and comment.

have a nice day

yann

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2009-12-27 12:51 PM

a fine, thoughtful 'write' ...

particularly the ending:

"it is sometimes better
  to come back to the port
  and to abandon the hope
  that she loves you,
  then to savor stars."

applause for this 'penning' !

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2009-12-29 09:26 PM

beautiful and seaworthy!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2009-12-30 09:28 AM

Thanks Seconhandreamer for your supportive and kind comment.

best wishes

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2009-12-30 09:28 AM

Hi Lady, loved your comment.

best wishes

yann

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2009-12-30 02:39 PM

I suppose I'm a hopeless romantic who prefers to see love among the stars than to return to a port to face reality.

Who knows, perhaps in 2010 the icebergs will melt within her head ~ and her heart!

Wishing you all the best in the new year!

Linda

www.lindadowd.com

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

8 posted 2009-12-30 03:16 PM

Maybe that's me. Nice write.

therightside
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 64
USA

9 posted 2009-12-30 05:33 PM

I like this

It's light and has a great feeling when read!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

10 posted 2010-01-01 11:07 AM

Yes Linda, thanks for the supportive comments, I have the same hopes and your comment has such kindness.

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

11 posted 2010-01-01 11:08 AM

Thanks SFA, enjoyed your humor at purpose, thanks for the sweet comment.

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

12 posted 2010-01-01 11:09 AM

Thanks therightside for the sweet comment and the read. appreciated it.

have a nice day

yann

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