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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England 
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Rhythmic movements shovelling snow, unveiling like a virginal white blushing bride, exposed its truth revealed in bright winter sunlight. Stooping quickly now, catching me unawares, exquisite cold thrust down, exhilarating yet numbing me momentarily, I retaliate swinging wildly like a broken windmill, laughter my impediment, pealing like church bells at eventide. Concentrating now, rolling first his head an imperfect sphere knarled and knobbled, lopsided grin, a carrot his nose, slate for eyes, body bare, branches for arms, plant-pot hat, standing guard, stoic, silent, snowman. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
ah that winter air ... 'piping for the blood to dance!' ... fine 'slice of life' winter 'write' ... applause for this 'penning'! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sounds perfectly natural!! A Merry Christmas to you. CT |
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