the first through the last (repost)

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Open Poetry #45

the first through the last (repost)

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2009-12-19 11:19 PM

you wander slowly through my mind
waking what was napping

and if a gossamer thread
could hold a dream
this one would be
the first spin

if the shell fragments flung
when the world egg cracked
could find themselves in fragile ivory
and form a star
it would be the second

if the quicksilver of your smile
could fall on the wayside
and I could find it for my pocket
it would be the third

if I could stand in the shade of your breath
and feel the warm in and out
touch my hands
it would be the fourth

and if a reed
whistling green notes
could call you to my side
and I could keep you
it would be the last

oh

it would be the last

Nancy Hardin
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 58
Nevada, United States of America

1 posted 2009-12-20 12:48 PM

"If the quicksilver of your smile
could fall on the wayside
and I could find it for my pocket
it would be the third."

Your words are so beautifully woven into a story, I love being enthralled by them. Blessings on you.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-12-20 05:06 PM

Excellent and filled with so much love. I remembered this because it impressed me so much also the first time around. It's a beautiful, most beautiful gift.

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2009-12-20 11:24 PM

Thank you so much Nancy.

Ahhhh Margherita, thank you. You leave some beautiful gifts on these blue pages yourself. I appreciate you so much!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2009-12-27 09:31 PM

Your pen is golden and so very delicate.
Each and every word spoke to me like a prayer,
with so much love and tender care.

Gorgeous poetry, lovely Lady~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2009-12-29 01:04 AM

Blues, I appreciate your thoughts

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