Open Poetry #45 |
Shades of Love, Shades of Blue. |
viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I saw you there, and you were magnificent. Tall like the sky and lean like summer seventeen shades of blue, eighteen shades of a loving hue. I'm not a godly man, but I prayed to what might be that I find something like that- something like you. Tall like the sky and lean like summer seventeen shades of blue, eighteen shades of a loving hue. ________________________________________________ Non-series related. I saw avatar yesterday, and here's my official plug: Avatar is the greatest movie of all time. You're robbing yourself of something truly great if you don't see it. I have never liked a movie as much as I loved this one. Absolutely hands down the most amazing film I've ever seen. GO SEE IT. Fall in love early, fall in love often. [This message has been edited by viking_metal (12-20-2009 01:25 AM).] |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I like the poem and thank you for the review I was wondering! |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks Lady. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very inspiring poem, dear Paul. I read the presentation of Avatar and saw a few scenes and I am intrigued, yes I will go watch it and I have no doubt that I will like it too. Love, Margherita |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
You'll love it I'm sure. It's my favorite movie now. I've seen it twice in the three days it's been out, seeing it again tomorrow night. haha. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
A great read I liked it Julie |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Glad to hear it, whiskeyjulie. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
You are very talented sir. It's amazing the phrasing that you come up with. Enjoyable to read. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks very much my good friend chalmello monsieur. That is quite a compliment, especially coming from yourself. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey Paul! Happy New Year - hope that you survived the celebration! I like the poem lots - and I don't go to movies much so probably won't go see Avatar. But, did I mention that I like the poem lots? A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Yes, yes you did. Thanks very much. You're a doll, Aliboo. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I always wished I had the crayons with every shade of blue when I was young. You put a new spin on that one! I may have blushed 18 shades of pink, though. Enchanting lines, "long and lean, every young man's dream; she turned every head in town!" (?) I really enjoyed this one, too. ~Karen |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Inspiration can come from the most unlikely places. I liked this poem of yours. |
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