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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
flying... half mast red flag waves white undulates between lightyears and heaven a pointless reflection somebody dubbed empty calories rain translucent slips silver linings simple sky-fall clutching footprints eyes closed girth disappears years love never defined ...and me |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"rain translucent slips silver linings" perfect and oh! that last line. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
enjoyed... Nourzihane |
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QuietAstronomer Junior Member
since 2009-12-13
Posts 18North Carolina, USA |
Highly whimsical. Very empassioned. Thank you. QA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Klassy One, I believe that there are more layers to this poem that may, on first reading, be apparent. I have my own take on this and I feel the urge to wrap my arms around you with warmth, love, and Light. Love you! Linda  www.lindadowd.com |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you all for taking time to read my poems. I appreciate it, even when the poem is not well-grounded, like this one. ~~~~~~~~~ Linda,  You are right. Thank you for the arms and gentle heart around me.... Love ~K. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A thoughtful write this one Karen. Enjoyed. Take care. Lindsay |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you, Lindsay, for peeking in. ~Karen |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
impressed.  Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: May you feel Universe's embrace and know that there is nothing pointless in it. Very profound write, dear Karen! Love, Margherita |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I love this one so much, incredible. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Ambiguously deep and thoughtful, enjoyed reading thank you.. Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
A lovely poem. Zeitgeist |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Klassy Lassy - very nice write... BC |
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