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ninjawild
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0 posted 2009-12-16 03:31 AM



...........a story of two...........

..once was said that they would never leave..
..as time went without word or notice..
..the water was falling from rocks and trees..
..a child leaped from a swing with wonder..
..its the plant of dream in his mind..
..laying the seeds throughout the wind..
..among the mornings and nights..
..numbers begin to defiantly weigh decisions..
..from one to one.. and two to two..
..steps from the first to many to follow..
..and many more steps to come..
..through the rainy days..
..to the leafy fallings..
..after the white snows..
..before the red summers..
..all would come to a soaring slow motion..
..a start of something newly found..
..a smile followed by another..
..a deep glance into anothers..
..thoughtful questions of mystery..
..leading to a happy discovery..
..when time became still..
..there were only two..
..when there were only two.. they made one..
..defying all numbers in existence..
..like winning what cant be won..
..like a step from the shy shadows..
..into the vast judgments of light..
..thoughtful words from the never ending deep..
..newer things to add to life's many and ever changing perceptions..
..the sheep decide to jump quicker..
..the moons fell and the suns rose..
..two as one made promises and devotions..
..like predictions without reflections on a glimmery stream..
..the fruit tasted sweet as ripe and taut..
..but can one find..
..and detail the screams from two battle fields on one's soul?..
..what two making one made with the one separate from the two..
..was imaginary as a toddler's favorite angel..
..but it still brings smiles to sudden blank faces..
..as it seems looking through thin material..
..into a picture of line and curve..
..when removed shall true feelings emerge?..
..devastating a blissful state of minds..
..the one dissolving..
..a statement usually replied to is left upspoken..
..for a reason of explanation as to why..
..for one of two said..
..im sorry..

..wisdom comes from the better choices of stupidity..
..curiosity is above all the best teacher..

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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1 posted 2009-12-16 06:20 AM


the way you presented this was very touching~~
M

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