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Night Streams. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Upon soft sheening sand, alone i walk cold, bedewed by blustered salt spray, head down into the wind of an improbable tommorow. Empty days of longing to hear the cadence of a voice that calls to me from a past life that sees easilly. Winter time brings heart clutched warmth to my bed, thoughts flood through like silver esturies in moonstream, blackness my mind, illuminated by love, tender devotion precious as rare birds eggs, my life colour different, but unforgettable. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
(empty days ....  this line and sentence is exceptional..your works are fascinating philsophically and emotionally. the form needs a little work. interesting pen |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Phil, this poem engaged all of my senses. ~ Captivating, vividly descriptive and drew me in to the moment. A very fine piece of writing.   Linda www.lindadowd.com |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
"...thoughts flood through like silver esturies in moonstream, blackness my mind." very nice indeed! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I always enjoy the nature walks through your eyes. This is just beautiful, inspite of the chill. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
wonderful imagery as always! much applause for this 'penning' !! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"head down into the wind of an improbable tommorow." ahhh Phil you never miss beautiful |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...walked in your footsteps, my friend...knew it all... j. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
unforgetable~ |
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