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Sunshine: Edition III
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Sunshine: Edition III |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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I beat the sun like brass, making three big bowls bowls to catch water from those eyes. With no water to be caught, I dipped my beaten sun-brass bowls dipped them into the sea. I carried the sea for you, placed it neatly in your lap you told me I can't take this I can't possibly take this, don't even want it. I took it back then, drank every bowl dry. Drank them dry and hurled them into the sky, and roared red things roared red things until they were the sun again. ________ Last installation of the Eyeball miniseries. Paul Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Paul, I am very impressed. You are wonderfully creative ... Love, Margherita  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Margo with a twist of lime, thanks very much. Paul Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Well what do you know? A part two?! Loved it. This one tops the other one. What else do you got? lol:superngrin: ARCTIC WIND |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Wow, this is really beautiful and passionate. It makes me want to read more! Loved it. Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Arctic wind, there are three parts. They're all on the first page here on open poetry. Sunshine, Sunshine part DEUX, and Sunshine edition III. Aenea, thanks so much. I appreciate it. I'm really glad you enjoyed. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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