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Open Poetry #45

Wake-up Call

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2009-12-13 04:17 AM

This one is quite angular
a peculiarity of ways
just her stance
when she says "huh?"
She's a kitten
yawning
"awwwwwwwww"
her pink tongue
oblivious:

"What is that you said?"

She is perpendicular;
she wears boots to have her say--
stomping click-heeled down the hall
I hear her enter my domain,
cautiously, the door's refrain:

slam

it locks her in -
ashamed
when I look at her
and wave?

she's sorry that she came.

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

1 posted 2009-12-13 04:22 AM

Put a smile on my face. Thanks

Zeitgeist

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2009-12-13 12:04 PM

outstanding

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2009-12-13 03:21 PM

slam i loved that when the door goes slam after the boots take on a persona of their own excellent.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-12-15 12:42 PM

Growing pains... the emotional ones are even more prolonged than the physical. *S*

SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

5 posted 2009-12-15 03:12 PM

Very original. Loved it.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2009-12-15 05:51 PM

Well done Ser... Nothing like holding
the trump card when one needs it.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2009-12-15 09:54 PM

Thanks for reading.

My love to you all.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2009-12-18 06:26 PM

Enjoyed...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2010-01-02 06:31 PM

Karen,

I like this so much that I saved it - thank you for sharing. I miss reading your poetry.

Happy New Year.
Alison

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

10 posted 2010-10-26 05:59 PM

nice

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