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In Passing |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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In Passing its funny just how far we fall when we think we are so right to find out we’re wrong and dreams change with each passing night "I'm so hard to handle |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - sometimes we think we are wrong, but we're still right. Hope you're doing well... BC |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
short and to the point love it. |
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watchingsummer New Member
since 2009-12-13
Posts 8USA |
i like how simple that was, but still meaningful. it's difficult to write a short poem and still make such a strong point with it. good job! "If I know what love is, it is because of you." -Hermann Hesse |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and dreams change with each passing night" you seemed to have stripped life to the bare bones Helen moving |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
agree, bernie email me A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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