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I Am My Burden (input please)
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I Am My Burden (input please) |
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therightside Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 64USA |
I always did... Demand. Command. Repremand. You would forever... Embrace, obey and convey. Convey to me your guilt. Convey to me your love. Convey the hidden depths of your soul. Yet nothing ever seemed enough for me, I know. Attempting to fill such an emptiness, only the coldest of hearts could bare... ...is a burden I'll never ask you to share. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sad to me I like it a lot |
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therightside Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 64USA |
thank you so much for taking the time to read and for your feedback. I greatly appreciate any input! If you have some time I have one more that I posted on the 9th, it is just below in this same forum "Stuck Inside Myself". Would love your insight. Thanks again! Take care  xo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
the poem tells a lot about you and yes, it's very sad well done! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a very deep reflection! Enjoyed... Whether one looks at himself or learns from others, reflection is a good thing i think. Very well written! Welcome to Piptalk! |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Nice. You won't ask..but will his heart listen?. Great depth in this one. Z. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this introspection very much... sometimes we know we're the problem. *S* Welcome to Passions! *S* |
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