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Open Poetry #45

Moving In Silent Rain

Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

0 posted 2009-12-09 08:45 PM

On a very clear beach;
Isolation reaches, slowly;

The sea dead,
it swims half way -I stop

The moment is with incomplete sense;
I'm out alone.

I can't afford the rain, when silent rain repeats.

see personal poetry blog:poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-12-10 05:22 AM

Mysterious, yet the imagery speaks to me.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2009-12-10 10:01 AM

very good

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2009-12-10 01:55 PM

I feel like Margherita, beauty and mystery.

regards

yann

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