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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Almost Anything She looks nice sitting there, diamonds in a heart shape in her hair, possibly bought by her latest boyfriend, willing to do anything to be with her again, well almost anything. JamesLee 03December 2009 |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Dear James you Write poetry in different colors and creat thank you for your creativity My respect Nourzihane |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your gaze seems to be both appreciative and inquisitive, dear James. Lovely write. Love, Margherita  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
lovely consideration, love is almost perfect. regards yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
James, I really like this poem. Alison |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
cool stuff |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
"well almost anything" its a horrible feeling, knowing the one you love won't REALLY do anything. just almost. nice write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Nourzihune, Margherita, 2islander2, Alison, GBride and SlowlyFallAway for the wonderful responses...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
well almost anything nicely done James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well written James...I always found with women, once rejected, they were like a brand new shoe tainted with mud when I stepped in the wrong place...I never wanted to wear it again, no matter how strong the yearning... j. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Nice one James but if you altered your words just a tad I think it would sound better. She looked lovely sitting there With heart shaped diamonds in her hair. I hope you don't take offence as I know some people do but it is a lovely poem and I enjoyed reading it. Take care. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, This works very well. Keep up the good work. Bobby |
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noman Junior Member
since 2009-12-26
Posts 18 |
Enjoyed this. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This is a gem. Enjoyed it. |
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