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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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you whisper wanting, watching... you nudge me, i'm not laughing... you shake me, seek me, softly... you confuse me, i'm not going... you break me, buy me, cheaply... you tease me, tell me nothing... you leave me, less than lonely... as you whisper wicked wanting... [This message has been edited by brneyedgrly (06-23-2009 11:39 PM).] |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Some people are just hell bent on playing with your head...they are just not worth your time. Great write! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and then you are taken...? enjoyed it ms |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Again Shellie, another style that you make work so well. I envy your diverseness, even if I just made up that word. Wondering if this is the continuation of that rough diamond one? |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Brneyedgrly, This is a good one. I'm glad you're not laughing, it's alway works better to be serious. This one is after my heart. Love Bobby |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I like the way you wrote this. This is great. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, guys... this one just 'traveled down my arm' as one of my fav poets, alice walker, would say...one take and there it was... thank you for your comments and i usually deliver some sliver of back~story on my poems in my replies, but... i am leaving the interpretation of this piece up to the reader... whatever you get out of it was how it was meant... ~love~ |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Brneyedgrly, if I read it correctly it sounds like a lot of gentlemen that I know of. Beware young lady. Love to you and take care. Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - Your as pretty as a kitten to know you is to be smitten a brneredgrly sweet as pie writing poems to make one sigh... Oh well, you do write them with heart... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It comes through loud and clear, dear Shellie. The bees have smelled nectar ... Great rhythm in this one. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am sure you may unwittingly be casting a few spells of ypur own, you beautiful, brown-eyed girly!   EA |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
dear, nice write..and true for the day i think..beautiful.. love, Min |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks all you guys...love to hear from each and everyone of you, always.... ~dearest min! where did you go? please email me or something, my far away friend ~hugs~ |
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