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Open Poetry #45

Square Peg.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-12-06 08:08 PM

I tasted the sex from the heartbeat
in your lean neck
and took a taste with my teeth and tongue

you asked me if that was supposed to fit
and I laughed
because that was the perfect blend
of woman and liquor

but you were serious
and that was the end of it
right there.

Dang.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-12-07 09:24 AM

You dared too much! Try with a little tenderness ...

Well rendered defeat.

Love,
Margherita

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-12-07 10:55 AM

Thanks margorius pargoritum.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2009-12-07 12:23 PM

oh well

shrug it off

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-12-07 04:27 PM

yup.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

5 posted 2010-07-31 04:18 AM

I like your writing when it is at its most honest. Dang this was good.

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