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Open Poetry #45

Our Love Is Strong

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2009-12-04 06:23 PM

Our Love Is Strong

Don't you see
Into my eyes,
It shows
every time we come by
And yet we feel our love
Isn't strong,
We get apart,
Like a flower petal falls,
Every time ,
I hear you call,
Let me know you,
Love,
Eyes,
Love Is strong,
As long as we stay alive,
No one will hurt us,
Our love Is strong,
Like a sun goes around the world,
Yet ,
We feel love Isn't enough
to light our eyes to shine,
But I do feel love
Is enough ,
Our hearts belong to
one another

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2009-12-05 09:45 AM

There is much strength in your heart and a sureness of the love you share.

Good to read you, v~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2009-12-05 12:22 PM

The flames still burn ever bright for you...
May they never dwindle.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2009-12-06 10:47 AM

Hi Vandana, love is sure and sharing it is a bless, I love the uncertainty of your poem and the way you express Love...Thanks for the enjoyable read.

yann

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-12-07 01:05 AM

vandana - great write with deep emotional feelings intertwined...

BC

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-12-07 09:26 AM

You have the right idea of love, dear Vandana. Beautifully expressed trust.

Love,
Margherita

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