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anniepimm54
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0 posted 2009-12-04 12:41 PM



No One In The Mirror

In the sweetness of your light "I see,
the mask of sadness that is space
and though you try to hide it
the sorrow is written on your face.

Please! let me share your burden,
let me hold your light in my hands
I will always walk beside you "my love,
never doubt am there please understand.

Sadness takes you to the place I once dare go,
but now in it's dead space I see me
lost and alone, so much alone
here in the world of the unforgiving! will it be.

Now I see the truth,
Of the reflection in the mirror to be
the loneliest soul in my universe
there is no one here but me.

Annie
3-12-2009

[This message has been edited by anniepimm54 (12-06-2009 01:24 PM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-12-06 12:21 PM


A sad write, but also compassionate. Sometimes we feel like this, but if you look long enough into the mirror you will discover All there is ...

Well written.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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2 posted 2009-12-06 01:21 PM


Hi Annie, this is well described and a truth sometimes for everyone, your poem is gracious and meaningful, I wish I could have write this like you did.

regards

yann

anniepimm54
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3 posted 2009-12-06 01:25 PM


Thank you Margherita and Yann for your kind words i am glad you liked the poem
latearrival
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4 posted 2009-12-06 05:06 PM


Some times  we  would be better off if we just turned the mirror's face  to the wall. Good  post. latearrival.
anniepimm54
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5 posted 2009-12-06 07:06 PM


Thank you latearrival.
ramisf
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6 posted 2009-12-07 09:18 AM


Sadness takes you to the place I once dare go
A mask of sorrow handled with lots of space
Retrieve your smile as an advice from a bro
Away to the pale color overruling your face
Have your teeth shown brighter than snow

anniepimm54
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7 posted 2009-12-07 10:47 AM


Is this a quote from another poem or a comment?
either way i don't understand what you are saying!! ramisf, can you specify? I comment would surfice more, than a quote from the works of others, as they mean nothing..  

passing shadows
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8 posted 2009-12-07 12:11 PM


I love this! Sad but still beautiful
Bill Charles
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9 posted 2009-12-07 02:27 PM


anniepimm54 - your heart speaks in this writing, enjoyed reading it...

BC

anniepimm54
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10 posted 2009-12-07 03:14 PM


Thank you passing shadows and Bill i am glad you liked it
ramisf
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11 posted 2009-12-08 06:26 AM


Dear Anniepimm54

I am a UN Travel officer and everyone knows me as the Smiling officer since i always find room for others to smile.
The poem i wrote was to encourage you to kiss goodbye the sorrow and make room for a smile since there might be thousands of reasons that make you sad but there are millions of reasons to make you Smile.

Sorry if my Reply post poem was not clear

anniepimm54
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12 posted 2009-12-08 06:42 AM


Ahhh Right thank you i wasent sure what you ment, but thank you for clearing it up for me and thank you for making me smile
Blessings to you

ken206573
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13 posted 2009-12-08 11:14 AM


What a beautiful poem, it was sad, but I like it. It does show how one feels.


anniepimm54
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14 posted 2009-12-08 12:14 PM


Awwww thank you ken thats realy nice of you to say so
JamesMichael
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15 posted 2009-12-08 05:31 PM


Fine writing...James
anniepimm54
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16 posted 2009-12-08 06:21 PM


Awww thank you James..
LindsayP
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17 posted 2009-12-08 07:40 PM



A sad poignant write dear Annie

but well written. love

Lindsay

anniepimm54
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18 posted 2009-12-08 07:50 PM


Thank you Lindsay..
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