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No One In The Mirror |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110
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 No One In The Mirror In the sweetness of your light "I see, the mask of sadness that is space and though you try to hide it the sorrow is written on your face. Please! let me share your burden, let me hold your light in my hands I will always walk beside you "my love, never doubt am there please understand. Sadness takes you to the place I once dare go, but now in it's dead space I see me lost and alone, so much alone here in the world of the unforgiving! will it be. Now I see the truth, Of the reflection in the mirror to be the loneliest soul in my universe there is no one here but me. Annie 3-12-2009 [This message has been edited by anniepimm54 (12-06-2009 01:24 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A sad write, but also compassionate. Sometimes we feel like this, but if you look long enough into the mirror you will discover All there is ... Well written. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Annie, this is well described and a truth sometimes for everyone, your poem is gracious and meaningful, I wish I could have write this like you did. regards yann |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you Margherita and Yann for your kind words i am glad you liked the poem  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Some times we would be better off if we just turned the mirror's face to the wall. Good post. latearrival. |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you latearrival. |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
Sadness takes you to the place I once dare go A mask of sorrow handled with lots of space Retrieve your smile as an advice from a bro Away to the pale color overruling your face Have your teeth shown brighter than snow |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Is this a quote from another poem or a comment? either way i don't understand what you are saying!! ramisf, can you specify? I comment would surfice more, than a quote from the works of others, as they mean nothing.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! Sad but still beautiful |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
anniepimm54 - your heart speaks in this writing, enjoyed reading it... BC |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you passing shadows and Bill i am glad you liked it |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
Dear Anniepimm54 I am a UN Travel officer and everyone knows me as the Smiling officer since i always find room for others to smile. The poem i wrote was to encourage you to kiss goodbye the sorrow and make room for a smile since there might be thousands of reasons that make you sad but there are millions of reasons to make you Smile. Sorry if my Reply post poem was not clear |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Ahhh Right thank you i wasent sure what you ment, but thank you for clearing it up for me and thank you for making me smile Blessings to you  |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
What a beautiful poem, it was sad, but I like it. It does show how one feels. |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Awwww thank you ken thats realy nice of you to say so |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Awww thank you James.. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A sad poignant write dear Annie but well written. love Lindsay |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you Lindsay.. |
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