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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2009-12-04 05:26 AM


The longer we wait
The more we make
We just hold out
Wishin on better days

Dreamin of violins singing better notes
And no longer accompanying lost hopes

Get home, sit down
Legs ache, slow down
Why are you mad,
Calm down,

Where are you going?
No sound.


"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."

"Hold faithfulness and sincerity as first principles."

-Confucius

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-12-04 06:37 AM


quote:
Dreamin of violins singing better notes
And no longer accompanying lost hopes



Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-12-04 11:34 AM


Very cool visuals, a day in the life!!

Cheers!


N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
3 posted 2009-12-04 06:53 PM


Thank you.
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