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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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 perhaps just soggy wind sticking to lingering meanderings or those cassandra moments when rincon is close again like the saliva side of a warm woman smile, just distant but touchable, the smell of sweet smoke kind that is there after mexico is not much different now, twenty years more mature but the sidewalks still find my feet at dawn with friendly sounds like the laces dragging across concrete seams, guitar picks on every other sigh of a strum, between the lines of empty I learned spanish while I was in china last year avoiding boredom and now these women realize that everything shows when they cry and that my eyes have seen their souls before, but now more often when they thought I was just another gringo with cigars and whiskey and secrets that never seeped the velvet of a holy joe confessional ________________ daark (bone road series) (photo DS) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-03-2009 09:15 AM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"and now these women realize that everything shows when they cry" i wonder at times... how you know so much of past the skin of women |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
ahaa.... Loving the cassandra moments!! Only you D~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick..so close to mother nature perhaps, listening..thanks ms slick ________________ ms bluesy..lol, I can hear you say that..thanks babe |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I once went to a holy joe confessional, but the moment wasn't as beautiful as the poem here. Love the pic too. Missed you. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..thanks little one, glad you are such a bad shot..(in context of missing me) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
like the laces dragging across concrete seams, guitar picks on every other sigh of a strum, between the lines of empty It's about time you got back in here with my fix. *G* Word withdrawal is just not a pretty sight! *S* Of course... I almost missed this... for some reason, I just don't associate you with "mundane" LOL Stunning images, beautiful work!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The spectacular picture had me spellbound for quite a while ... and the text of your incredibly profound poem represents quite the challenge, there is so much seeping through ... in poetic perfection. Sending you a big hug for coming back, you were missed! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thanks lady friend, I missed your wiggle word on my pen spatter too _____________ ms mar, humble thanks ms...was a perfect moment for the photo...the poem just squirted out on it's own. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
You have such a multi-lingual talent for the art of expressing grace and visceral roughness all in one breath! How some things speak the same language no matter the locale, and words become mere shadows on wings, like the tips of your gull's feathers...but it's heart orbs in feathers...lofts on the thought and sunlight. I'm hooked on the imagery, too. ~K |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms KL...thanks lady friend...you make me smile.. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
layered prose, his words softly unsticking her heart, she's earthbound no more. Indigo Glad you've returned from your journey, D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms indi It is a pleasure to find your smile brimmed at this offering |
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