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tommy738
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0 posted 2009-10-31 12:13 PM




As it crept over the mountains
I was blined by its light
I couldnt see what was in front of me
Actually that was quite nice
Because in that moment of blindness
The world became clear
Never Take a day for granted
And never live in fear


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1 posted 2009-10-31 01:03 AM


You bet!  Great message.
Margherita
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2 posted 2009-10-31 04:31 AM


Yes, this is a highly significant message. Thank you. Have a beautiful day.

Love,
Margherita

tommy738
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3 posted 2009-10-31 12:51 PM


its amazing some times the things that seem so little can bring about such clarity in your life
MorningStar
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4 posted 2009-10-31 05:22 PM


I do so love an epiphany!  Kudos to you for great insight - thanks for sharing!

If I don't say it...who will?

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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5 posted 2009-10-31 08:10 PM


Stopped to smell the roses eh? Great Write!

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

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